Dead Inside Chapter 1 Read Below Dead Inside Snap 1SEC Thank you for reading this installment of Dead Inside by J. W. Becton. Keep Reading Leave me a comment! What do you think of chapter 1 of Dead Inside?
Awesome. Cannot wait to read the entire book. Very intriguing.
Yay! Happy Dance! Thank you for reading and commenting. Me likey feedback.
I’m hooked and excited for the next instalment. Type faster…please
Woohoo! Thank you for reading!
MORE, like yesterday. I like the characters and the chemistry that is developing between them also this weird case and the brain. It makes me miss classic CSI when Gil Grissom was trying to solve a case that stumped him and his team until that one minute detail only he was able to figure it out and get the bad guy.
Yes! I’m glad the two main characters are working! Sometimes it’s hard to get the chemistry right. But I’m kind of in love with both of them already.
Wow. This is so good and it’s only the first chapter. I can’t wait to find out what happens next!
Double yes! The next chapter will be available September 19. Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
Most definitely! I love your people and their stories
This was great! I really feel hooked on the story and characters are intriguing. You have a good writing style and “voice” that really like… so this was a real treat!
Looking forward to the next chapter/rest of the book.
Thank you for the feedback, M. R. I’m beyond thrilled that my voice comes through even in a short chapter. You make my writer’s heart soar.
Very interesting! I take it the action takes place some time before the Christmas short story you wrote a few years back?
This story is similar to the Christmas one, but my mythology has changed a lot. The Christmas version is not really part of this timeline.
Good to know. I’m looking forward to this novel/series based on the Christmas story, but am sure the changes will only be for the better.
This is going to be an exciting read. It’s rare when a book already has your attention in the first few pages and this chapter did that for me. Can’t wait for the next installment!
Yay! I’m thrilled that you’re interested in Adam and Calla!