16 thoughts on “Dead Inside Chapter 1

  1. MORE, like yesterday. I like the characters and the chemistry that is developing between them also this weird case and the brain. It makes me miss classic CSI when Gil Grissom was trying to solve a case that stumped him and his team until that one minute detail only he was able to figure it out and get the bad guy.

    1. Yes! I’m glad the two main characters are working! Sometimes it’s hard to get the chemistry right. But I’m kind of in love with both of them already.

  2. Wow. This is so good and it’s only the first chapter. I can’t wait to find out what happens next!

    1. Double yes! The next chapter will be available September 19. Thank you so much for reading and commenting.

  3. This was great! I really feel hooked on the story and characters are intriguing. You have a good writing style and “voice” that really like… so this was a real treat!

    Looking forward to the next chapter/rest of the book.

    1. Thank you for the feedback, M. R. I’m beyond thrilled that my voice comes through even in a short chapter. You make my writer’s heart soar.

    1. This story is similar to the Christmas one, but my mythology has changed a lot. The Christmas version is not really part of this timeline.

  4. This is going to be an exciting read. It’s rare when a book already has your attention in the first few pages and this chapter did that for me. Can’t wait for the next installment!

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